I'm totally new to website publishing. Can anyone take a peek at my site pls? I'd love to hear suggestions and comments. Thanks..

well, website is too pinky... but not bad, I like it... btw, nice guidelines! I love short stories...

Very nice, Rachelle! Looks clean, easy to read and it's pretty.

The only incidental correction I can see is #5 is in the same paragraph as #4.

Good luck with it and your adsense words!

It looks good. Nice and easy for me to read

- Brian -

oh, thanks cmbrewer..i forgot the breaks..thanks for all those who checked my site too.. your visit is much appreciated..

Hey, fellow pinoy!

I agree with the others, there's too much pink for my taste.

I like your header motto though, and will be brosing your works of literatur at my leisure.

could you post you creations to my site also? (if you add URL to your site, users will be able to see it)

To be totally honest with you, I will start off with I like the layout and the colors are great. it is easy to read at first glance. Here comes the suggestions for improving the site. The portion that says "Any complexity in life is " is not well seen and if you want it to be you should consider changing the background color or placing that whole portion on another part of the site that is lighter in color. Also darken the text "how to write a short story" This will bring more attention to it. I currently think that is is way to light.

I am not sure if it was intentional or what, but the about me, articles and so on is a bit blury. This will be difficult for some sight impared people to read. You may want to consider doing something a little different.

Otherwise, I have bookmarked the site to come back to later to both check up on it and to really thoroughly check it out.

yea, it really is too "pinky" but I really designed it that way..hehehe..as it is my first site, I wanted it to reflect my personality..but needless to say, it's not very attractive for men surfers..lol..For the fonts, i was having a tough time choosing the suitable fonts because I had only a few to choose from that's why I settled for those..but I'd definitely use your suggestion attagirl, but maybe later, as i am still on the process of building micro sites..lol

That is good because it is ultimately up to you anyway. I would like to say that you should take a look at it from the point of view of the readers and see why they would think the things they do. Once you can look at the site objectively you will find things that you will want to change to make it look better.

yea, thanks a lot attagirl..i'll do just that..

You are very welcome. I am glad to see when people realize the help they are getting and can view their projects in a different light. Once you do this and you do this with every project you work on you will be able to see the many small changes you can make to improve those projects or sites.

yea, i agree..you are very helpful..thanks..

I would like to wish you a lot of luck on your website and will definately be checking out the whole site just ot see what is going on with it.

yea, i might do the edits after i'm done with my micro sites..thanks a lot..

That is an excellent idea and you should definately make sure that you have things in order and what you want to do.

yea, i will...

Good for you, I wish you the best of luck and if there is anything that you ever need please feel free to pm me about it.

i have started 4 blogs at blogspot..you might wanna check at the layout..

http://rachellearlincredo.blogspot.com
http://storymistress.blogspot.com
http://worldpoetrymagazine.blogspot.com
http://googleadsenseinfo.blogspot.com