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phildunn
I just build a small simple site about gpt programs, i know there're a lot of sites like this and nothing new to everyone... happy.gif just give some comments about design and what new stuff should be added gpt. smile.gif thanks wink.gif

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USAOK
The design is nice, like the colours of the top banner, and background, but you need to work on laying out your information to make it readable. As it stands right now, it looks like a mess, and makes it difficult to read.

Don't use flash, just because you can, use it for a purpose. Right now that flash banner in the middle of the page serves no purpose.

The last thing, and probably the biggest thing I see is that you are using too many different fonts, and too many different colours. Stick with one font type, maximum 2. When you start using multiple fonts, it makes the site look very childish. Have the font colour match the design. Get rid of the green and brown completely, as they only clash with the design. Pick one shade of blue and go with it. Otherwise stick with a darker colour.

All in all you have a great start, just needs some tweaking.
phildunn
thanks for advice. i redesign site to make it more tidy.

How about content? Need add more stuff?

Everybody pls give comments. Thx wink.gif
lalajean
I thought you site needed some work. I find it a little boring. Maybe you can add some more interesting story telling about yourself.

The main page needs some work. Try writing some ideas on paper and then put them into the site.
phildunn
Thanks for comments. I will keep working.
simonsays
It is good that you can take creative critisism. I think that the posts above are right and if you take the advice into consideration that you will go far with the site. Content is a very good thing to have on the site and the point is to keep people at the site for as long as you can. To get them to help you make money.

There are some really good things about the site. The colors are great and eye catching.
attagirl
I think the way it could be improved is maybe some more pictures and definately more content. Change in color scheme to look more professional would be great. the blue and red is an eye sore. It makes the site look busy and the the big green lettered money thing, just makes it worse. I would choose colors closer to the graphic at the top of the page and not be afraid to put grey or white in the site. I know alot of people think when they first create sites that colors are great and they are but very little background type color is much better and the point is to attract people. I think if you keep the colors the same it will mkae people click away faster.
phildunn
Thanks everyone. I will keep improving my website and add more stuff happy.gif
phildunn
i make some enhancements, any comments i would appreciate, thanks.
simonsays
The changes have made a great difference. But I would continue on working on it until you are completely satisfied with the end results. Is it live yet? I would consider putting it live and adding a guest book and ask for comments.
phildunn
Thanks for comments. I will keep improving.
ilikefreebies
Did you use dreamweaver or antoher HTML editor?
ilikefreebies
I think maybe you don' tneed the Daily Money to the left of the page. The banner is nice and it says daily money.
phildunn
QUOTE(ilikefreebies @ Jun 9 2005, 11:52 PM)
Did you use dreamweaver or antoher HTML editor?
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I am using frontpage but i am now trying to learn dreamweaver. smile.gif
PAWi
the dreamweaver is good.
You can use a slicer to cut this big logo, it will be faster loading the page wink.gif
vincy
not bad. Keep on working on it. I have a site that will list your information site for FREE so be sure and submit it. The site is in my signature.
phildunn
I make some new changes to my website. Currently out of idea to improve it more. Anybody pls give any critics comments. smile.gif Critic the bad part of my site so then i will keep improving. happy.gif
sandrodz
first of all, header, it's nice, idea is good, but I think you can improve the quality tongue.gif

phildunn
QUOTE(sandrodz @ Jun 25 2005, 02:19 PM)
first of all, header, it's nice, idea is good, but I think you can improve the quality tongue.gif
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Quality? Do u mean design,content or both? pls be more specify. Thanks. smile.gif
sandrodz
phildunn
no, neither design nor content... it's just blurred, not crisp and clear...
phildunn
QUOTE(sandrodz @ Jun 25 2005, 03:22 PM)
phildunn
no, neither design nor content... it's just blurred, not crisp and clear...
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Do u mean my graphics blurred? unsure.gif
sandrodz
yes, left side is good, but to the right, near the globus, pixels are abit distorted don't u think? duno, may be it's my monitor...
phildunn
I make some changes in font color,size and put some ads. Please review my site again and give any constructive comments especially emphasize the site's content Thanks. smile.gif
PAWi
the colors are good, but like I said please use a slicer to cut this logo wink.gif
phildunn
QUOTE(PAWi @ Jul 17 2005, 04:53 PM)
the colors are good, but like I said please use a slicer to cut this logo wink.gif
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Sorry i am not good in design tongue.gif what u mean using slicer? unsure.gif
PAWi
phildunn the slicer hm I try to explain wink.gif

You have this logo on your website and If it's loading You must wait to see it :> when You cut it via the clicer for 4 pictures it will be faster loading imho

check the http://pawi.plocman.pl/ You see it now? one picture cut for few others :> btw. my page isn't functionally yet
phildunn
QUOTE(PAWi @ Jul 17 2005, 05:44 PM)
phildunn the slicer hm I try to explain wink.gif

You have this logo on your website and If it's loading You must wait to see it :> when You cut it via the clicer for 4 pictures it will be faster loading imho

check the http://pawi.plocman.pl/  You see it now? one picture cut for few others :> btw. my page isn't functionally yet
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Thanks for advice smile.gif
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