Besides earning money and saying stupid things on this forum I also like making music, I got some sort of a home studio to record at home. At the moment I'm busy with a good friend of me, Tewitte. I'm a beatcreator/producer(sounds cool ) of music, most times its nederhop (Dutch hiphop) and now we made a song which will be on a compilation-disc soon. Very exciting all, at least 1000 discs will be made If they'll sell a lot there will be more of them...

The song is called "Mijn beurt" (My turn) and the text is in Dutch, tell me if you like it or not! By myself I think the sound is a littlebit to hard, not very much bass in it. But that Tewitte-dude tells me what he want's, it's his song so he has the last word about it

I also put another song below, an instrumental, old song from myself...

Click here to dowload "Tewitte - Mijn beurt"
Click here to download "RZN - Da break part 01"

...Rick

Lost my speakers here at work will download them when I get home later!

Looks like you got nice work except of the speakers

...Rick

Yup - 2 minutes work, 5 minutes ChitChat, 2 minutes work, etc. helps the day go by faster

Dewitte gone home yet?

My opinion here, Dutch style, no messin'

Myn beurt:
Starting of with the text about de ondergrond (the underground), I was hoping to hear a flaming protest against the wrongs in our country. Hmm... not much of that... too many repetitions in the text, can't he think of anything to say?
Music: not enough bass, drums too loud.
Overall: mediocre/needs more work.

Da break part 101:
Rick, you've got talent!! Fantastic. Solid, almost classical composition (did you have music lessons?). A little suggestion: what about sounding the bass notes of the chords longer? Like a basso continuo in Baroque music?

Who/what else is gouing to be on the CD?

It's Tewitte, not Dewitte

I like the text by myself. But you're right there are some repetions in it... Only chorus should repete, other lyrics shouldn't be repeted. it's not a protest against the underground, this is just his style, don't want to be called underground or mainstream...
I told about the bass, this is not one of my favrite beats....

Longer chords could be nice, but I created a "Da break part 02" too, part 01 is a short, fast, light, less bass. The part 02 is the dark side. Deep bass and weird, slow beat. Not everyone describes it as hiphop. I'll upload it later today, I haven't got time now....Need to go back to my lessons! (I'm at school )

But thanks for this nice review of the two tracks, very nice of you to be honest about those tracks

...Rick

added: don't know who'll be else on the CD, they're all underground MC's. I hope it will be a nice CD with high quality