Now i'm building my own GPT site and because my english is not my first language i have some problems.
Please can you tell me if the following passage is ok or i have to modify it:
Full Version: Some english problem
Get Paid Forum - Get Paid Discussion > Webmaster's Corner > General Discussion on Building, Running & Making Money from a Website
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To make your membership more enjoyable we have designed a small game named |
If i have to modify i it, please can you make me a suggestion?
Thank you
That sounds fine to me 
Cat.
Cat.
A new problem
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| Once you have decided the number of? *********, make the spend to our e-gold account |
I think that make the spend is not the right thing
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A new problem
I think that make the spend is not the right thing . |
It should say something like this: "once you have decided the number of ********* please make payment to our e-gold account"
Cat.
Thanks a lot
Now i have another problem. I promise that you will be the first to know about my site.
Now i have another problem
. I promise that you will be the first to know about my site.| QUOTE |
| Your details have been update according your requirements. |
Any suggestion? I would like to make it sound more official
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How about this...
Your details have been updated according to your requirements.
Your details have been updated according to your requirements.
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